New script and story beats 3-3-07

Here is the new updated 35th revision of my script. I took a lot of comments from the other day and sort of incorporated them in a few ways. I'm much happier with the way the story plays out now. Also I put in a story beats page for this script, now all that is needed is to smooth and refine the story, still way a long from finished but now I know where I can go with it. Below is the link to the NYU pages where the pdf's are located. Have a good weekend
Tom...

http://homepages.nyu.edu/~tfh213